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Sunday Story Ratings #15: The Visitor

 

The Visitor by Lee Child (Jack Reacher #4)

Originally published 2000 by Bantam Press; this edition 2001

Publisher: Bantam Books

 

MA15+

(V, S, L, D, N)

Violence

Sexual References

Frequent Coarse Language

Drug Use

Nudity

 

Representations

Gender:

Tight third-person coupled to the male protagonist, occasional anonymised interludes featuring antagonist-candidates. The novel makes a point of establishing the protagonist's feminist credentials by primarily believing women who filed sexual harassment complaints in the US army.

Sex:

Only heterosexual sexuality represented. Sexual tension and attraction is a strong thread.

Race & Ethnicity:

All characters white US citizens that I was aware of, except a couple of incidental characters each of Syrian and Chinese origin.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

One character is described as having a physical disability. Several characters among the killer's prospective victims are represented as having been traumatised by sexual harassment and rape.

 

Awards

Barry Award: Nominee

 

Borrowed this book from my mother's collection, I believe I am its first reader. This along with the previous two novels I read would be the one that started me on my current spy / mystery fiction kick. I quite enjoyed it, despite The Visitor also featuring snippet perspectives from the killer being hunted.

On the one hand, it is a bit frustrating to be several hundred pages ahead of the protagonist on matters like the means of murder (point of order: in real life it wouldn't work, but as a fictional trope, very recognisable), but I suppose I must also give credit to Lee Child for playing fair enough with the facts and what we are shown for this to be doable. I could say it is just because the whole thing smelled a lot like The Poet by Michael Connelly, down to (effectively) the same person being the killer, but I've read two more Jack Reacher novels since then and in all three my gut feelings have been substantially correct tens to hundreds of pages ahead of the characters.

It weirds me out. I've read plenty of mysteries in the past and almost never do I know what's going on before the detective lays it out. I suppose it comes of these leaning more into the realm of thrillers than mysteries?

I don't actually count this against the book, in the sense that I still enjoyed it a great deal, and was quite happy to read all the others in the series that I had to hand.

Sunday Story Ratings #14: Orion Arm

 

Orion Arm by Julian May

Originally published 1999; this edition 2000

Publisher: Voyager

 

M

(V, S, L, D)

Violence

Sexual References

Coarse Language

Drug Use

 

Representations

Gender:

As with the first novel in this series, first-person narration by the male protagonist. There are also anonymised interludes from the perspective of a male antagonist. Essentially identical to Perseus Spur.

Sex:

First appearance of non-vanilla, non-heterosexual is as degrading exploitation of prisoners for gratification of the privileged classes and each other. There are some incidental trans characters portrayed as grotesque and potentially victims of coercion. One character on the side of the heroes mentions in a throwaway line having previously been in a relationship with another woman. All other depictions of non-normative sexuality are as perversion or punishment.

Race & Ethnicity:

The characters of colour from the previous book return in reduced roles. One new character is from Eastern Europe.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

The characters must deal with aliens of diminutive stature relative to humans, and spend time on one of their vessels. Coercive body modification including transgenderism used as threat, punishment and symbol of moral corruption.

 

Awards

None of note.

 

At least the worst of what is mentioned above had a relatively small presence in the story.

 

In a series like this it is normal, I believe, for the cast to expand and fill out over successive volumes. Here the focus contracts around the narrator / protagonist more tightly, meaning we see less of the characters I liked from the first volume and the new characters have reduced presence compared to last time.

 

I also dislike in mysteries getting anonymised snippets from the or a villain's perspective. The additional context gets in the way of my desire for 'pure' detection, where we have only information and perspectives available to the protagonists and they must work out what is happening, how and why, without our knowing for sure. In this case, because the last book left us with a strongly favoured suspect for a traitor, the anonymised perspective here made it pretty immediately clear to me which other person it actually was and spoiling what may have been meant to be a twist toward the end of the novel. I probably would have been surprised otherwise (because I'd not noticed a significant clue in the first book).

 

This would have been a satisfying end to the story except that all the outcomes promised on the first page of the first book had not yet happened, so I ordered a cheap copy of the final volume. This copy, along with the first volume, was picked up from a discount bin at a newsagent most of a decade ago.

Sunday Story Ratings #13: Perseus Spur

Perseus Spur by Julian May

Originally published 1998; this edition 1999

Publisher: Voyager

 

M

(V, S, L, D)

Violence

Sexual References / Mild Sex Scenes

Coarse Language

Drug Use (Medical, Augmentative, Social Drinking)

 

Representations

Gender:

1st-person narration by a male character, most of the other characters are also men. The only conversations we become aware of that took place between women also concerned a man. Gender roles are superficially egalitarian.

Sex:

Story is infused with presumed heterosexuality. One character is asked if she might be in a relationship with another woman, but denies this and later engages in a heterosexual relationship.

Race & Ethnicity:

Most characters are white, those with known origins being from North America. One minor character is black, one major character is Mexican - there is Spanish sprinkled in the story from both him and the protagonist - one major character is from off-world by way of the Caribbean.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

One character spends much of the novel in recovery from serious injuries.

 

Awards

None of note

 

Trying to work on being more clear with some of these details, such as how much items contribute to the final age-rating and for what. Probably won't come through with that for a while, as these are backlog from the weeks I was AFK (which I shouuuld get round to saying something about too, when I find the time). Also noting where I got them from.

 

This book and the next one, by the way, I bought cheap at a newsagent years ago because I'd seen them round lots and got curious. Hadn't read them until now 'cause of the half decade I spent not reading fiction. Liked them a lot despite the book making my editing fingers twitchy to fix it at first. Very trashy, straightforwardly fun space opera.

 

The narrator has a tendency to infodump, and recap excessively, and there aren't counterbalancing positive qualities unless you want to read a lighthearted thriller set in space, which I did. Made a nice change in tone from what I'd been reading the previous couple of months.

 

What else? The book features single-biome planets, but at least they are more interestingly described than e.g. "desert world". Also liked that the future depicted is a corporate colonialist dystopia, that the main character is a beneficiary of this system and committed to its abolition. Although he still definitely slips up. I find the biological liberties harder to go along with than the physics ones, but still managed for the sake of the story.

 

This all sounds a lot more negative than I feel, I think. It's fun! But probably only fun for people who enjoy the genre? Or maybe just me; it's hard to get copies of these now and they used to be everywhere for several years.

Sunday Story Ratings #12: Little Women

Little Women by Louisa M. Alcott

Originally published 1868; this edition 1991

Publisher: Exart Pty Ltd

 

G

(L, D)

Minor Coarse Language

Minor Drug Use

 

Representations

Gender:

Almost all the characters are female, leading to thorough Bechdel-passing. Notions of ideal womanhood are strongly tied to self-denial and sacrifice for others, and duty. Jo struck me as rather delightfully genderqueer (at least), and very disappointed to see her praised for gradually losing this aspect of herself.

Sex:

Implicitly heterosexual only.

Race & Ethnicity:

When I read the book I had a strong suspicion their maid is black, but I did not notice any direct indication or acknowledgement of race or ethnicity, apart from some US-English rivalry in which the English characters unsurprisingly came off worse.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

One character suffers a serious illness during the course of the story.

 

 

I was rather puzzled when I finished reading this (on New Year's Eve, at Sydney Harbour waiting for the fireworks), because much of what I had picked up about the book from popular culture did not seem to be present. A possible reason presented itself when I tried to add the book to my library on LibraryThing - despite claiming on the cover to be 'complete and unabridged', the copy I read was missing the sequel volume Good Wives, which seems to be pretty consistently packaged together as part of the same novel, to which further volumes are considered sequels. So, it could be that much of what I thought would happen actually takes place in that volume.

 

While I often enjoyed the characters and their interactions, and especially Jo, I don't think I'd like to read any further of this. The moral thread of the story was a bit too dissonant for me to want more.

Sunday Story Ratings #10: Dragon's Treasure

Dragon's Treasure by Elizabeth A. Lynn

Originally published 2003; this edition 2004

Publisher: Tor

 

MA15+

(V, S, L, D, N)

Some strong violence

Sexual references / A sex scene

Coarse language

Mild drug use

Some nudity

 

Representations

Gender:

Easy Bechdel pass. Although only one of the major viewpoint characters is a woman, her scenes frequently feature conversation with other women about matters of daily life. Sexism is primarily displayed by characters we are not intended to sympathise with.

Sex:

One of the main characters is bisexual, carries on a relationship with a man and a woman in parallel, and expresses an intention not to choose between lovers.

Race & Ethnicity:

The kingdom represented in this novel contains a variety of ethnic groups, some with tension between them. A month after reading I don't recall any specific racial representation, which suggests everyone may have been white. A major region within the story felt coded Italian to me.

Disability, Physical Diversity and Health:

One character is mute and communicates by signing. Some other characters suffer PTSD and / or continuing effects of injuries sustained in the previous novel (which I have not read). One character loses an arm and gets on with eir life.

 

Awards

19th place: Locus Poll Award, Best Fantasy Novel 2005

 

 

I don't think there was anything epic going on in this book, and I quite liked that. Much of this novel featured the characters going about their daily lives with sides of intrigue and relatively ordinary personal drama. It made a nice change from just about everything else I read, a pleasant surprise. There was no incest in this book, maybe in the next one, if ever that is published?